For my portfolio i decided to revise my pepsi light ad analysis essay. I feel like the strengths of my paper ware that i made sure the reader had a clear vision of the ad without providing the photograph. Another aspect of my essay that I feel that I did a good job in was in analyzing the ad.

What i feel less confident about is about connecting my thesis to the rest of the paper and then organizing it. Also, my word choice.
I will apply this to improving my paper for my portfolio. I will make sure that all my evidence connects to my thesis and that i don't get out of topic. I will definitely keep my analysis that I did thought my old paper.