In my last graded papers I have noticed that my thesis statement has not been strong enough. Because the thesis is a very important part of my paper, not having a strong thesis can effect my paper. The reader of my paper can be quite confused if my thesis is not clear. What I can do to avoid this problem in my future papers is to make sure that my paper is less confusing and less vague. I also need to make sure that my thesis statement connects with the rest of my essay. Asking a friend or a teacher to approve it is also good , they can guide you in the right direction if you are confused.
Another pattern of error that I notice in my paper is a lot of run on sentences. This effects my essay a lot because my grade depends a lot on my grammar. Sometimes I do it without noticing and sometimes when I review it myself I don't find these errors because I read it without looking carefully for these errors. A way that I can fix these errors is by reading the paper and looking specifically for these errors, another way is by having someone read my paper before turning in my final copy.
One of my biggest problem in my paper is not being very descriptive. I tend to be very vague and not expand to what I have to say. This effects my paper immensely because my peer reviewer might not know what I'm talking about. In a lot of my comments I find that people ask me to talk a little bit more about the subject. If this is resolved it would improve my essay a lot. It will meet length requirements and also it will help bust up my grade because the reader will have a more clear idea about what my paper is about.
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